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Breath in that fresh air,
live now, if only to breathe.
Close your eyes, love.

The world, isn't what it is.
If it isn't fine now...
when shall it ever be?

Perhaps it'll get better,
but no, this endless circle.
It shall never cease.

While we live, it will live.
Always we'll breath in,
this world, free of peace.

Oh, it will stay forever.
Long after you and I,
raging in the soul.
©2007-2008 ~bittersweetmasque
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Yeah, pretty sucky. I might try writing poetry again, but... I dunno.
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~FictionalSoul:iconFictionalSoul: Nov 2, 2007, 4:00:24 PM
it's not that bad! you should keep writing! =)

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~bittersweetmasque:iconbittersweetmasque: Nov 2, 2007, 4:02:47 PM
o.o You're fast. But anyway... thanks, I guess. :P
~FictionalSoul:iconFictionalSoul: Nov 2, 2007, 5:07:37 PM
really, don 't give up! :D and you're welcome.

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